Audience feedback.

Audience feedback.

What was good/effective about the project?

-          The idea is really good, and the contrast between dreams and reality is drawn out.

-          The backing track.

-          The voice over – explains the story.

-          The Opening titles.

-          The different use of camera shots to tell the story.

-          Clever and neat transitions.

-          The link between instruments and everyday items.

What did you like?

-          Good array of characters.

-          Some interesting use of mise-en-scene.

-          Camera shots.

-          Opening titles.

-          The sound bridge.

-          The voice-over to help explain the story.

-          Colour in the shots (lively) explains their life.

-          The guitar and mop, this shows the comedy element.

-          The background music.

-          The narrations.

Any suggestions for improvement?

-          Sound levels (the voice over to increase and the backing track to be lower smoothly).

-          Courtney Burch after Atlantis productions.

-          Stop the typewriter when the words stop.